... Is that a Doctor Who quote from the episode Blink?... Because if my favorite FIM fan fiction writer, heck my favorite writer in all, who wrote "Winding Roads" and "Entangled Pathways" likes Doctor Who... I... I... Just... Wow... You sir, amaze me, beyond all reasoning.
Sorry it is taking me a long time to reply to your sheer awesomeness! But I got kicked out of my house, and it took a while to get a place to stay, haha... Partially for being bi no less, my mother was never to happy about that. Anyways, I love your story A LOT, because I can relate.